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Thursday, August 24, 2006
Colloboration
So sometimes I dabble in poetry as everyone does LOL..this is something that I posted on yahoo 360 and a friend added to it (and no it's not about Constant LOL, it's just something that was going on in my brain). His lines are in color (It's called No need):
There is no need for me to explain myself…you already know,
what I think before I think it, what I need before I need it, because you are the wind, that I breathe,
There is no reason to question,the depth of my love for you…because I am always here,
through the good times,and the bad, when all is quiet,or when storms rage outside,I am here, and you know it.
There is no need for time to stop, no second-guessing to leave me wondering…what if, there is
no need for self-doubt,or self-hatred, nor is there a need for pity,because of you, self has
become a we, each moment with you fills me with longing, for the next breath, the next
taste,the final thrust of lovemaking, there is no need to want anymore for happiness, because
I have finally realized that, I have it in you and there is no need, to ever change that
There is no need for me to explain myself…you already know,
what I think before I think it, what I need before I need it, because you are the wind, that I breathe,
There is no reason to question,the depth of my love for you…because I am always here,
through the good times,and the bad, when all is quiet,or when storms rage outside,I am here, and you know it.
There is no need for time to stop, no second-guessing to leave me wondering…what if, there is
no need for self-doubt,or self-hatred, nor is there a need for pity,because of you, self has
become a we, each moment with you fills me with longing, for the next breath, the next
taste,the final thrust of lovemaking, there is no need to want anymore for happiness, because
I have finally realized that, I have it in you and there is no need, to ever change that
posted by Ms.Honey at 7:51 AM
16 Comments:
I sure hope this isn't about Constant.
stilt...LOL umm no boo boo haha.
that's nice... i could just imangine you saying it.. and then i dude coming in to complete the lines...
oooh i like that a lot! nice stuff chica!
I always enjoy collabs!
ttd..thanks girlie it surprised me
the l...I wrote what i wrote and then he came in it was quiet nice.
ladynay....i do as well
just me..thanks girlie...what can I say i was tryin to be hush hush LOL, but i had nothin to write about so I posted this.
Great poem...I like the way you show the collaborative effort. Many people hide poems away which limits the art form. Thanks for sharing!
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lol@stilt. lawd...
what i wanna know is who did the collab WITH you, hehehe
That was nice...
And I'm with nikki... I wanna know...
bionic..thanks the collab came out of nowhere and I'm ever thankful that he even shared
nikki...surprisingly just some random guy who reads my blog LOL and yes stilt is a character LOL
luvin me..thanks...he suggested that we collaborate more often LOL
LOL @ some random dude.. ok.. some random dude that tightened that up to say.. HELLO.. look at me :)
good job.. I like ;)
BK...LOL that's what I said at first and yes he is soo random I don't even know what he looks like LOL
Thats hot!
The piece is definitely different now, you might want to consider
re-posting it minus his contribution;?
hell yeah for the collaboration piece!!!!!
oooh me likes this one :-)
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